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The flower that smells sweetest is shy and lowly..
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

An exquisitely looking dress with beautiful detailed embroidery, overall this picture is captivating, but there are some points of critique.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletorange:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="567" title="Bullet; Orange"/> I feel that the sharpness of the face is somewhat lost due to focus on the sleeve instead of the face and neckline, though I suppose this was done as to put emphasis on the embroidery. Instead of on the model?

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="210" title="Bullet; Red"/> The overall focal point and blur could have been better executed.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletorange:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="567" title="Bullet; Orange"/> The lipstick is a bit strong compared to the soft blue hues and creates a strong contrast instead of looking soft as well. I'd have opted for a more neutral colour as to maintain the balance and have the embroidery claim more attention.

Summary: All by all this isn't a bad picture, but it could do with some refining.