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My Immortal

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You used to captivate me
By your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along...

 

by Evanescence


-=*Credits*=-

Female Model~ lisajen-stock.deviantart.com/a…

Background~ almudena-stock.deviantart.com/…

Roses & petals~ zememz.deviantart.com/art/3D-C… , 0ranma.deviantart.com/art/Saku…

Necklace & little heart~ gabiglam.deviantart.com/art/Ch… , shoofly-stock.deviantart.com/a…

& the rest is painted by me in CS4.

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© 2014 - 2024 k-i-mm-i-e
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Shirokibo's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

First of all, what I like most about this piece is the colour usage. A wonderful red against a dull background, not too red, but enough to make the contrast just nice. I found the roses used to be very appropriate, adding to the atmosphere (of romance), and they really complement with the red flowers in her hair.

I have also compared what you have done against the original stock image of the model, and I've got to say that I'm really impressed by how you were able to change the aura of the model so well to suit this piece: the black eyeshadow and liner are a really good additional touch. They make her look more sorrowful; they tell me that she is not truly happy with the romance she experienced, or maybe the aftermath of the romance that ended, but the pink of her smiling lips say that she is trying to be strong. The red highlights to her hair are amazing as well.

On a side note, maybe it's just me, but I feel you should have added a bit more light to the left side, because it didn't feel to me that light is coming from the right, but more from above. Nevertheless, I still feel this is a great piece of photomanipulation!