You used to captivate me
By your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase
I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along...
Female Model~ lisajen-stock.deviantart.com/a…
& the rest is painted by me in CS4.
I think you expressed very well how she is holding the necklace as if it was her last hope. I recommend you to try to add just a little more brightness but this work is perfect as it is so I don't think it actually needs any changes.
Keep it up!! I am just a begginner so I don't know if this was really helpful but I do believe it's a great work. Hope you continue like this.
And sorry for my English it isn't my oficial language so I hope this at least was useful.
( something VERY good Rowena would do. )
p.s. - damn those bloody thorny roses ! Sill, I suppose immortals regenerate from the damage . . .
No, seriously, this is beautiful, meaningful, atmospheric, etc.